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LokeErBest
LokeErBestLv149mth
2024-03-26 23:12

Didn’t really have high expectations when I saw that this was a symbiote fanfic, but this piece of art blew me away. It’s engaging and fun to read first of all. The characters feels real and not some phony dream versions. My only ick with this book is that I read the chapters faster then the author can make em’😂 5/5, excellent job. Keep going. p.s. if you ever decide to make a pa tr eon, you have my vote.

Marvel: A Symbiote's Journey

BananaPancke
4.3
47 Chs

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BananaPancke
BananaPanckeAuthor

Thanks for the feedback. Glad you're enjoying it so far! Calling it art is extremely high praise, so thank you ❤️ I'll try and make sure the quality of my writing and storytelling only increases as I go along, so please keep giving me feedback.

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Binge_Reader69
Binge_Reader69Lv1

On the Symbiosis scale, this gets a 5/5, Fully Bonded

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Yurutto
YuruttoLv14

Honestly I don't have any complaints, I love this fanfic and I hope that you won't drop it.

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JxstASyko
JxstASykoLv14

Loved the mcu and venom. Always wanted a good symbiote story that didn’t just drop so hopefully you keep goin. The writing quality is good, just sometimes there weird parts, otherwise it’s all fine

6mth
IamValenci
IamValenciLv12

The way MC forces themselves within the plot in my eyes is not smart yes I know they are written to be a fan, but it just seems she just lacks the intelligence to do her own thing. In comparison, I like that the author did give the MC a different symbiote than Venom good job on that. Though this story is only 39 chapters in I do hope when i come back to it the author can improve.

6mth
Mathias_Olsen
Mathias_OlsenLv14

To start with i really love the idea behind the story, and the interactions between the the characters also feel naturel with the differing personalities, speaking slightly different. I also want to say the pacing is good but, since there is only 15 ch atm it's not easy for me to tell. And even the quality of the writing is good, as i haven't seen any spelling mistakes that took away my immersion. So to sum it up, great story and continue doing what you are and i believe it will be a fantastic read

8mth
Siobhann_MK
Siobhann_MKLv14

Awesome novel! The story is awesome and well written. I also like the way the story progresses. Great stuff...

9mth
Sebastiean
SebastieanLv5

the story was fine until the asgard arc like you went out of your way to cause problems and it really is ruining this whole story she didn't need to do anything but you decided she should follow thor to asgard and beat up loki for no reason just to make her fall asleep with magic even tho you can't mentally interfere with a symbiote considering it's part of the symbiote God you know one of the most powerful people in marvel but you decided sleep magic should work on it

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Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv11

Tentacle +18 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮 [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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IzIm
IzImLv13

My only complaints is slow story line and not much action

6mth
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