( Author here for the second review ) Read this thing, if you want to know about the book... šWriting Quality- 3/5 ā Seriously, I don't know how to write, I am a science major so, you can say my grammar sucks but hey, I found out people like my grammar. No cap! The Grammarly app shows I have 100+ grammar errors per chapter yet, people like my grammar. Imma be honest, I write how I speak ( English ) and no, I am not from an English country. Also, there may be typos here and there so, please point it out so that the next reader may have a better reading experience. š Story Development: 5/5 ā Sigh! To be honest, for a lemonšš Novel, this is the best story development you see, and no! I am not bragging, if you like to read Lemon without a beta Mc and a good story where Mc isn't scared then, it is a good place for you. Yeah! Mc doesn't need hundreds of chapters to Fugg a woman. He just needs 3-4 chapters ( I mean just a meeting ) You can find; Manipulation, BlackMail, threats, etc. Also, the adventure is good + making connections and the world building is somewhat good. šCharacter design: 5/5 ā what can I say, I design my character from one hand š. ( female character ) šUpdating stability: 5/5 ā 3 chaps a day guaranteed. However, when I have some work or I am busy then, 2 chaps a day. š World Background: 3/5 ā for a Lemon, this is the best world building you will find with cultivation, pills, and diverse race of harem members~ ahem* ahem* I mean, diverse race, culture, traditions, worlds, and other stuff. āāāāā Unique things about my book: šConstellation Choice: as a reader/ constellation, you have complete mastery over the main character and world. You can actively change the story with your participant. šPay to win: donate gifts = Mc getting stronger. ( well with the karma system, it will be somewhat balanced š for a better flow of the story ) š Lemons: Spicyšš š mirroring author: talk nicely and get a nice reply, talk badly and get a bad reply. š begger author: author will beg for a power stone daily. ( yeah! You better donate it or you dying single this life, no cap! ) # Downside; š No Ntr, No Yuri: this book doesn't have Netorare, but there is Netori. Also, no Yuri. š No Slow progression: Mc will gain strength fast and the story progresses relatively fast, just in 50 chapters Mc has multiple blood claudins ( Seggs Sl@ves ) š Cringe dialogue and cliche plot: Sad life brothers, this book is affected by cringe cultivation dialogue like, ā Go and meet Yama, ā ā Courting death, ā ā It seems this brat hasn't seen Mt.Tai ā
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