webnovel
avatar

Review Detail of Evil_Truth in The Lustful Young Master is Sinister!

Review detail

Evil_Truth
Evil_TruthModerator23dEvil_Truth

( Author here for the second review ) Read this thing, if you want to know about the book... šŸ“Writing Quality- 3/5 ā€” Seriously, I don't know how to write, I am a science major so, you can say my grammar sucks but hey, I found out people like my grammar. No cap! The Grammarly app shows I have 100+ grammar errors per chapter yet, people like my grammar. Imma be honest, I write how I speak ( English ) and no, I am not from an English country. Also, there may be typos here and there so, please point it out so that the next reader may have a better reading experience. šŸ“ Story Development: 5/5 ā€” Sigh! To be honest, for a lemonšŸ‹šŸ‹ Novel, this is the best story development you see, and no! I am not bragging, if you like to read Lemon without a beta Mc and a good story where Mc isn't scared then, it is a good place for you. Yeah! Mc doesn't need hundreds of chapters to Fugg a woman. He just needs 3-4 chapters ( I mean just a meeting ) You can find; Manipulation, BlackMail, threats, etc. Also, the adventure is good + making connections and the world building is somewhat good. šŸ“Character design: 5/5 ā€” what can I say, I design my character from one hand šŸ˜œ. ( female character ) šŸ“Updating stability: 5/5 ā€” 3 chaps a day guaranteed. However, when I have some work or I am busy then, 2 chaps a day. šŸ“ World Background: 3/5 ā€” for a Lemon, this is the best world building you will find with cultivation, pills, and diverse race of harem members~ ahem* ahem* I mean, diverse race, culture, traditions, worlds, and other stuff. ā€”ā€”ā€”ā€”ā€” Unique things about my book: šŸ‘Constellation Choice: as a reader/ constellation, you have complete mastery over the main character and world. You can actively change the story with your participant. šŸ‘Pay to win: donate gifts = Mc getting stronger. ( well with the karma system, it will be somewhat balanced šŸ˜‚ for a better flow of the story ) šŸ‘ Lemons: SpicyšŸ˜œšŸ˜ˆ šŸ‘ mirroring author: talk nicely and get a nice reply, talk badly and get a bad reply. šŸ‘ begger author: author will beg for a power stone daily. ( yeah! You better donate it or you dying single this life, no cap! ) # Downside; šŸ‘Ž No Ntr, No Yuri: this book doesn't have Netorare, but there is Netori. Also, no Yuri. šŸ‘Ž No Slow progression: Mc will gain strength fast and the story progresses relatively fast, just in 50 chapters Mc has multiple blood claudins ( Seggs Sl@ves ) šŸ‘Ž Cringe dialogue and cliche plot: Sad life brothers, this book is affected by cringe cultivation dialogue like, ā€œ Go and meet Yama, ā€ ā€œ Courting death, ā€ ā€œ It seems this brat hasn't seen Mt.Tai ā€

altalt

The Lustful Young Master is Sinister!

Cultured_Daoist69

Liked by 8 people

LIKE

Replies6

Mhay_xxi
Mhay_xxiLv6Mhay_xxi

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Mhay_xxi
Mhay_xxiLv6Mhay_xxi

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Mhay_xxi
Mhay_xxiLv6Mhay_xxi

[img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift]

The content has been deleted
Mhay_xxi
Mhay_xxiLv6Mhay_xxi

[img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry]

The content has been deleted
Mhay_xxi
Mhay_xxiLv6Mhay_xxi

[img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift]

The content has been deleted
Mhay_xxi
Mhay_xxiLv6Mhay_xxi

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

The content has been deleted