Review Detail of Zelretchthetroll05 in White-Haired Template System

I think the history is acceptable the plot and the story development is acceptable but i think the mc is a bit underrated because if he have the template of byakuran will be easy to defeat all clans in this territory without problem, other than that I don't see any problem with this history (please dont destroy it with an unreasonableharem or something stupid like that)