Review Detail of KsoGhost in Where I am ?

The story started off good, but then it just kept going on a spiral of nonsense, in the beginning it was a goofy little slice of life story with some comedy sprinkled in, it was great(aside from some grammar errors) then it went from goofy to Tadano r*ping Yamai, the development of a second personality, some kind of weird memory fragment bs, and he’s the son of a Shinomiya, it feels like the author is spinning a wheel to add as many unnecessary developments as possible