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Ifunnyok
IfunnyokLv12mthIfunnyok

I've read about 15 chapters and thee story would've been a lot better if the author had a editor or someone they know read over their work, since they make a lot of mistakes and structure sentences strangely. If you can look past the poor English its a cool story and a cool concept in general it 100% has potential

Reincarnated as a Tower In the Multiverse

The_Immortal159

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The_Immortal159
The_Immortal159AuthorThe_Immortal159

I appreciate your review... Well I am just working alone so it's hard to find all the mistakes but I will work on my grammar 🙏🙏

Ifunnyok
IfunnyokLv1Ifunnyok

Its less about your grammar and more about your wording I really like your story so far though

The_Immortal159:I appreciate your review... Well I am just working alone so it's hard to find all the mistakes but I will work on my grammar 🙏🙏