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TheWriter117
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After reading 8 chapters, I can safely say that this is the best example of how not to write a story. The characters don't act like human but rather meat puppets for the author in this fantasy that obviously takes inspirations from some fantasy hentai and a certain Healer anime. The dialogue is so awful and laughably bad, I don't get why they speak so over the top and feel so alien like no human can ever say this without laughing at how cheesy and goofy it is. The prose is just terrible and unintentionally hilarious. The worldbuilding is just vague and simply makes up how it goes along while ignoring to establish logic and rules. Anyways, I'm sorry, Author, but this is just bad. Really bad.

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i mean that was merciless hahahahah but thanks for the honesty.. i really appreciate it. i will make sure to make it more like human talking on their free will and the revenge element is not too significant for the story i just wrote it for some crisp its not a revenge hentai novel. i will improve the dialogues too about the logic its a fantasy genre book but yeah i will try to not write stupidity and yeah about the prose i will see on that also thanks!!!