An incredible novel, the writing quality feels a bit strange and/or unprofessional, but I understand the author may be a beginner, or English is not their first language. Whatever the case, it is proper enough to be a good novel. Story development is decent. It progresses at a slower pace. However, it still works. Character design is a bit vague, and I find myself not truly seeing/feeling their personalities and characters. Updating stability from the looks of it is great. World background is very interesting, and it is one of this novels greatest aspects along with originality and plot. Overall, it is an incredible novel that I would absolutely buy as a paperback, after a few touch-ups, of course!
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