Review Detail of krokrok007 in Primordial Tempest: The Saga of Nico Silva
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The overall idea is pretty good but the authors attempts at every sentence sounding super mysterious and complicated. Sometimes simple words count for 6 complicated ones that the author doesnt even know what is their's exact meaning or how to use them the right way in a sentence.
Primordial Tempest: The Saga of Nico Silva
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Thanks for the feedback! I appreciate your thoughts on the overall idea. Regarding the style, the first few chapters underwent editing by a friend, which might explain the complexity you noticed. I’ve taken your comments into consideration, and in later chapters(I think from chapter 6), I’ve aimed for a simpler approach to improve readability.