Review Detail of AOFD in Elites From Another World

I was planning on writing a review when I was done with the first volume, but things happened… and here it is! So "School Of The Elites" is a story centered around a group of "irregular" children, and naturally the first Arc, is based on them and their schooling, it's an introduction of the sort. But the later story arcs, although still connected to the school because it is a major element of the plot, are not just about them schooling, because that's boring and time consuming. I'm not completely sure if they would actually have a "class" apart from the crucial ones, but if there is ever a class scene it's focus must be on something else. Let me move from the boring stuff and the plot devices to the world building, I mentioned somewhere in the story that it is a fantasy themed story in a modern world, so their world is practically not normal, but unfortunately they don't fly in it, and are mostly good at using their heads… or not. And finally, which could possibly not be the final paragraph, my main character. I mentioned several times that "it is her world it just happens to revolve around many others", that's because almost every character introduced are related to the story or the other main characters. Or the characters might be a prelude to the other important characters. The main theme of the story is Memory loss, so of course they're connected, who knows they might have met themselves once in the past… or not. Once again I say, And finally, I have two main characters, two! The first one is Ean, Heaven Kinston whom we should all be familiar with, If you read the synopsis, prologue or the actual story and came here. While the second one is somewhat hidden, and plays a major role in the plot… or not. Just kidding, he actually does. One more thing, the character has not been introduced yet, but he should have been mentioned a few times. If you've read this far, how about reading the prologue then the novel itself. Then you can come back to this section, and hopefully leave a good review. Now, SOTE was the name of the book. But things happened, and… it's now Elites From Another World. I don't know how authors write their stories, but I just discovered something very important about mine, so I decided to change its outfit. New title, hopefully add a book cover, improved synopsis, and a more improved plot. So tell me, what exactly are you doing here? Aren't you going to start the novel?!