Good story so far. I like fics with an Alice focus. It does give me the feeling that I have read it quite a while back tho, a year or two. Is it based on another fic?
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LIKENot a lot of fanfics that I have read that have Edythe or Jessamine in them, but the ones I did read, the MC met at a college and in that one it had described both girls. That might be the one you might have remembered. I took those descriptions from that fanfic. Also, some fight scenes from others that didn't make sense like werewolves in Solo Leveling. But I'll try to rewrite those that need adjustment from the previous chapters, as I continue writing. I apologize, I am not a literature major.