Review Detail of Vincent_0580 in Humanity Unchained

I am not a professional writer, so the character design and writing quality are not top-notch. But, I have to give myself some credit since I always use Grammarly (the free version) to check for mistakes. I am going for a character that takes pride in his humanity. He is immortal now, so he will have to deal with that. In the beginning, he is trying to learn and grow more powerful, so that takes time. (Warning spoiler for ch. 8) To give an example here. If the MC sees things that are custom or just part of a tribe's culture he won't care. But if for example, he sees humans sacrificing humans because they want to appease a beast like a dragon, he will intervene and get rather angry.