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Review Detail of Fraktal in Obtaining 10x rewards! Reincarnated into a novel as a side-character!

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Fraktal
FraktalLv1523dFraktal

This feels very much like a randomly cobbled up together story. Things just pop outta nowhere and many settings of the world background just don’t make any sense or are forced to justify the story. The most annoying thing is the MC, he feels braindead and make stupid mistakes. You can see it clearly with the elixir thing at the beginning. He just strolls in the clan, digs an ancient elixir and goes at the center of the clan where it is watched by powerful people to give it to his sister?? WTF, how would he justify having something like that, found it on the roadside? But thankfully forced development happens and he gets beat up half to death (which he should have seen coming but we’ll be is braindead) and gets a forced opportunity to give it to his sister (like why the hell did she appear?). Same for the market where he gets pickpocketed in his own clan’s market. Anyway the story is full of cliche forced development such as this. It’s sad. It could have been good.

Obtaining 10x rewards! Reincarnated into a novel as a side-character!

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Fraktal
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The most forced stuff is his necessity to train harder than the main characters. What bullshit. The system is a 10x reward, he should be able to lay flat and become OP as long as he lays low and waits a little, why is he so restless to get stronger? It’s so nonsensical! He has already bound it to his twin sister who is supposed to be a monster for god’s sake. Anyway it leaves a bad taste due to this unnecessary route.

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