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That_Cultivator
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2024-03-11 23:09

Shameless author here, I am rating this 5 stars cuz this is my work and i can't rate it any less. all I wanna say is, if you find any errors, want me to fix something or wanna suggest something, do leave comments on the chapters and paragraphs. Grammar will improve with time, don't worry about it.

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CicadaAlive
CicadaAliveLv1

yo cicada here the story so far has a good start and i could see this developing into a great story . some pointers can be : - The word divine is used too much - Each paragraph is short and contains only 1 dialogue

That_Cultivator
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yep yep, ty for the review! I will fix these mistakes in the future chapters! thanks a ton for pointing 'em out for me buddy!

CicadaAlive:yo cicada here the story so far has a good start and i could see this developing into a great story . some pointers can be : - The word divine is used too much - Each paragraph is short and contains only 1 dialogue
Im_LaZy_007
Im_LaZy_007Lv13

bro, is this harem or Single FL?

That_Cultivator:yep yep, ty for the review! I will fix these mistakes in the future chapters! thanks a ton for pointing 'em out for me buddy!
That_Cultivator
That_CultivatorAuthor

single fl :)

Im_LaZy_007:bro, is this harem or Single FL?
Hardy1j
Hardy1jLv14

That be like good!!!!!!!!! Amazing!!

That_Cultivator:single fl :)
Im_LaZy_007
Im_LaZy_007Lv13

đź‘Ť

That_Cultivator:single fl :)
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