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2024-05-27 01:04

So this my first time giving any review. I would that this story is the bestest. I love this novel. The character development of male lead is just wahhh. How he slowing started to fall in love with her. I love the bold and strong character of female not like other stories which have a weak fl. I would love too see how she is going to take her revenge from her family. This is not cringe at all. I know that the in the staring author had started things a bit faster but few chapter everything was perfect. The grammer is little bad in the starting. I love the nick name "babygirl"馃槶. It is kind of sexy when ml give nick names to there girl. I know that some people will the story being fast in the starting. I was also not like it when things was going little fast but then it was okay afterwards. I had a soft corner for the ml when I found out about his terrible past. it was a heart breaking past of both ml and fl. I was so happy and gasped in the air when he brought all colour of roses just to apologize her. This is worth reading. I would suggest everyone to read it.

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