Review Detail of cytwz in Transmigrated into the World of Frieren

Item: Transmigrated into the World of Frieren
Rating: 3.2

Review detail

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I recommend you try making other fanfics, your writing is great, just a little practice and you can become a great writer (at least the translator was good)

Transmigrated into the World of Frieren

Mel0n_Pan

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DiscardedLv3Discarded

i agree. the author have talent in writing but not so good at planning story if this fic have plan at all. MC overpowered in day, MC demon got better talent than human, MC want to save demon race without reason, frieren and human around MC stop doubting demon MC in a single day. it's already a mess without a room for future improvement. better to just create new story because this fic already gone wrong fundamentally

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cytwzLv3cytwz

Discarded:i agree. the author have talent in writing but not so good at planning story if this fic have plan at all. MC overpowered in day, MC demon got better talent than human, MC want to save demon race without reason, frieren and human around MC stop doubting demon MC in a single day. it's already a mess without a room for future improvement. better to just create new story because this fic already gone wrong fundamentally

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