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Review Detail of Dragonfly_SS in The Walking Dead: Riley's Journey In The World Of The Dead

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Dragonfly_SS
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This is an honest opinion, I don't really like the self-insert taking over Clementine's body, but I don't know that yet, as I have only read the first chapter. The writing isn't bad, but there were too many holes that made it hard to visualize what was going on. The character dialog felt a bit rushed but well thought out, and somewhat natural; If this is your first fic then kudos.

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The Walking Dead: Riley's Journey In The World Of The Dead

PEKABOT_2005

Liked it!

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Dragonfly_SS
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I don't think you can change it.

IWantToBeBuddha:Change your review to five stars or something. We got to help this author out. I barely see any TWD game fanfics on Webnovel.
PEKABOT_2005
PEKABOT_2005AuthorPEKABOT_2005

No he did not take over clementines body

Dragonfly_SS
Dragonfly_SSLv12Dragonfly_SS

That's nice to know.

IWantToBeBuddha
IWantToBeBuddhaLv1IWantToBeBuddha

Change your review to five stars or something. We got to help this author out. I barely see any TWD game fanfics on Webnovel.

Dragonfly_SS:That's nice to know.
IWantToBeBuddha
IWantToBeBuddhaLv1IWantToBeBuddha

Just delete this review and make another one. If you're not willing, I understand.

Dragonfly_SS:I don't think you can change it.