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INVELNIME
INVELNIMELv49mth
2024-06-02 22:17

Biasanya aku akan memberikan pendapat ketika aku selesai membaca semua bab yang tersedia, namun ketika aku mengetahui kalau penulis ini adalah orang Indonesia dan bab pertama di dalam novel ini lumayan bagus. Aku beri sedikit pengecualian. Sedikit saran, alangkah baiknya jika buku harian itu bisa diperbarui menjadi sebuah system yang hanya bisa dilihat oleh si protagonis dikemudian hari. Karena jika tidak, akan mempersulit pengembangan cerita yang akan datang.

I Can Write the Fate of Heroines to My Liking!

WildCatMan
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WildCatMan
WildCatManAuthor

Yup. Gua pribadi juga nggak suka sama cara sistemnya berkerja, tapi baru coba diperbaiki selepas Bab 15/16.

9mth
INVELNIME
INVELNIMELv4

oh benarkah, bagus kalau begitu? Ngomong-ngomong ini terjemahan atau hasil karya sendiri?

WildCatMan:Yup. Gua pribadi juga nggak suka sama cara sistemnya berkerja, tapi baru coba diperbaiki selepas Bab 15/16.
9mth
WildCatMan
WildCatManAuthor

Karya sendiri, tapi ditulisnya pake B. Indo dulu, terus di TL ke Inggris lewat DeepL, dan baru di Edit sebelum dirilis.

INVELNIME:oh benarkah, bagus kalau begitu? Ngomong-ngomong ini terjemahan atau hasil karya sendiri?
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INVELNIME
INVELNIMELv4

Oh... kalau begitu. aku berharap kau bisa menyaingi sosok Akikan dalam hal popularitas dan karya seninya. jika menulis sebuah novel kau anggap sebagai prioritas utamamu, tentunya.

WildCatMan:Karya sendiri, tapi ditulisnya pake B. Indo dulu, terus di TL ke Inggris lewat DeepL, dan baru di Edit sebelum dirilis.
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