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2024-09-26 14:36

I liked this story very much, and I liked the rain even more, the system is also very lovely, and what should I tell you about the chemistry that exists between the system and rain.yes sometimes I don't understand some things but the story is good

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Kuroitsuki
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Thanks for reading 🍁😆. This is my first ever novel so my writing is a bit clumsy... I promise it will get better in the latter chapters

Kuroitsuki
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You can ask me anything in chapter comments, I'll summarize it for you to understand easily🍁☺️

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Aizashi
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hi and hello, this is my first time writing a review, so forgive me if it sounds strange. i haven't finished reading yet, but so far (ch ~70), i can't complain about anything. the MC's personality feels both consistent and likeable, the same goes for his system and many other characters. THEY MAKE SENSE. this story is NOT suffering from "Oh, i saw something interesting in another work, so i collect those things and stuff them all into my story" like so many others out there. there are genuine moments of surprise and amazement. the interactions and conversations are well-paced, and the world-building isn't just nice, it's great; there are several inventions i never saw elsewhere (yet, but i read a lot so they most certainly aren't common). And if they do exist elsewhere already, they're still described nicely and totally fitting into the story and flow. as seen in another review, there are some typos, but even as someone who feels rather allergic to them, it didn't break the flow of reading. It has a healthy balance between "omg I'm on edge" and "awww, so wholesome". I'm not sure how to say this, i just feel like the author put a lot of thought and soul into this work, making this an individual journey and definitely more than "just some random novel", also causing me to write my very first review because i believe this work deserves it. i hope the quality stays like this until the end, but i have a good feeling about this. So, for all those of you looking for a novel with its own not-copy-pasted soul in this genre, I recommend giving it a try! 🫡✨️

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