Review Detail of Hell_Dragon_Azavok in Second Chance in Naruto World
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Notice- I am really sorry that I had to delete my work yesterday for some reason. But don't worry I will post all the chapters which I had published before and continue this work.
Second Chance in Naruto World
Hell_Dragon_Azavok
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well I think you need to do a rewrite or you know merge chapters or something because Evan 20 plus chapters and not a whole lot happen. I'm in the fact that you had to use the word count sheeting to get your story on the list with 20 plus chapters is kind of sad because most people would that many chapters wouldn't even need that cheap because they would have the word count just by the real chapter merge your chapters you're going to have less than 15 you probably have maybe what 7 to 10 real chapters and also your story is boring so far it's been nothing but training hardly any social interaction with anybody and the only one he did was before his test at the academy and then when he beat up those kids that was it
