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AllhavensLv118mth
2024-03-18 06:01

Below is a comment from a reader who could not be more perfect in defining the story in a few words. Idiot MC ✓ Annoying System✓ Quest System with punishment ✓ ['System Slave' Title acquired]

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General_Mahoraga
General_MahoragaLv3

ah system with punishment😒

stultusXU
stultusXULv12

as if being a fish wasn't bad enough

Daoist4MxvaV
Daoist4MxvaVLv13

i never saw idiot mc as a valid review if the mc repeats the same mistake sure , but if he just made a bad decision once , its fine . I can say with certainty that u did something stupid at one point in your life

Allhavens
AllhavensLv11

The guy had a sarcastic and vengeful system stuck to his soul and scolded him once again. He was electrocuted by the system and even lost stats, if memory serves. And even after all this, he still remains irritating and tends to irritate his master (the system). If this isn't stupid for you, maybe it would be interesting to rethink your life a little. Being a fish was more than enough of a disaster, but he had to be stupid and use a lot of sarcasm against the only thing that could keep him alive. As if that weren't enough, the system doesn't seem very easy to use. If all of this together doesn't disgust you, congratulations on your nerves of steel and have a good reading. But it's not for me.

Daoist4MxvaV:i never saw idiot mc as a valid review if the mc repeats the same mistake sure , but if he just made a bad decision once , its fine . I can say with certainty that u did something stupid at one point in your life
Daoist4MxvaV
Daoist4MxvaVLv13

firstly I never said the mc isn't stupid , I was just giving advice dont always give your reviews over the mc intelligence , a stupid mc actually gives room for lot of cool character development and always keeps things interesting.

Allhavens:The guy had a sarcastic and vengeful system stuck to his soul and scolded him once again. He was electrocuted by the system and even lost stats, if memory serves. And even after all this, he still remains irritating and tends to irritate his master (the system). If this isn't stupid for you, maybe it would be interesting to rethink your life a little. Being a fish was more than enough of a disaster, but he had to be stupid and use a lot of sarcasm against the only thing that could keep him alive. As if that weren't enough, the system doesn't seem very easy to use. If all of this together doesn't disgust you, congratulations on your nerves of steel and have a good reading. But it's not for me.
Daoist4MxvaV
Daoist4MxvaVLv13

u nee more patience in your life my friend

Allhavens:The guy had a sarcastic and vengeful system stuck to his soul and scolded him once again. He was electrocuted by the system and even lost stats, if memory serves. And even after all this, he still remains irritating and tends to irritate his master (the system). If this isn't stupid for you, maybe it would be interesting to rethink your life a little. Being a fish was more than enough of a disaster, but he had to be stupid and use a lot of sarcasm against the only thing that could keep him alive. As if that weren't enough, the system doesn't seem very easy to use. If all of this together doesn't disgust you, congratulations on your nerves of steel and have a good reading. But it's not for me.
DaoistObvious
DaoistObviousLv14

I don't think it would be a "cool character development" if the character was so overly bad that you would even question how someone could be that terrible. Like, it's so obvious that the author just made him that way so that he could improve tremendously. But i don't know. Maybe that's just me.

Daoist4MxvaV:firstly I never said the mc isn't stupid , I was just giving advice dont always give your reviews over the mc intelligence , a stupid mc actually gives room for lot of cool character development and always keeps things interesting.
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