Bad story in terms of keeping the reader involved in the "plot", in fact who is going to stop the reader from dropping the work before getting to where the author promised an improvement? It's the basics of the basics. However, I support the author not giving up on writing or even trying to make a good start for this ff, many loose ends and other things.
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