I always read the first 5 chapters to write a review. Now, my thoughts are that I see some flaws. For example, why is he an airbending master? Why does nobody care that he's an airbending master? Seriously, an airbending master appears and nobody wonders where he came from? All he does is say 'come, I'll train you' without any questions. Also, it seems like the story is following the script of the entire series step by step for now. Well, that could change; I only read the first 5. The main character is just a spectator; he doesn't change the events. Hmm, I don't know what good thing to say.

Bad story in terms of keeping the reader involved in the "plot", in fact who is going to stop the reader from dropping the work before getting to where the author promised an improvement? It's the basics of the basics. However, I support the author not giving up on writing or even trying to make a good start for this ff, many loose ends and other things.

Story is amazing so far hope that stays that way at the moment he isn’t really the villain which I prefer but give the story a try

remove the villain tag, he's not a villain at all because of your exchange I've read 20 chapters and there's no hint of a villain [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

I know that it still has 3 chapters but that doesn't change the fact that it's good and has the potential to be the best fanfic of avatar as of now

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lol i just read it for the ruthless mc i dont have much to say its good nothing else

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I hope the next part comes put real soon