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WetAppleDream
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no plot to the story no original ideas you can do better

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Hinoka Hyuga

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WetAppleDream
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- creating main outline for your story, MC's purpose for example let's say MC want to find a way back home to earth because he misses his lovely daughter or wife or whatever else, the Shinobi world and the original outline is just the background. - slowly add more outline in your story as minor points in the story, which later on will give more colours to the story. - explore more than just Konoha - this is ofc fanfic so you are free to put more elements into this, such as bringing inspiration from other stories into your story, but ofc make it inline with the story's concept - creative ideas? hmm you need to explore this urself. this shows how creative you are

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I'll try. How can I?

WetAppleDream
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I remmember the webnovel posted a guide for writing stories or novels, it's very good.

Nen_pin:I'll try. How can I?
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Nen_pinAuthorNen_pin

Ok I'll read it.

WetAppleDream:I remmember the webnovel posted a guide for writing stories or novels, it's very good.
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Nen_pinAuthorNen_pin

Ok thanks! Tell me what you think of the next 5 chapters.

WetAppleDream:- creating main outline for your story, MC's purpose for example let's say MC want to find a way back home to earth because he misses his lovely daughter or wife or whatever else, the Shinobi world and the original outline is just the background. - slowly add more outline in your story as minor points in the story, which later on will give more colours to the story. - explore more than just Konoha - this is ofc fanfic so you are free to put more elements into this, such as bringing inspiration from other stories into your story, but ofc make it inline with the story's concept - creative ideas? hmm you need to explore this urself. this shows how creative you are