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Deathwatch99999
Deathwatch99999Lv156mth
2024-10-24 09:09

The story was alright up to around chapter 175 where for some unknown reason the author started mixing chapters together to the point it was too jarring to read. Before that the inconsistent and/or misplaced and/or misspelled names along with Chinese Proverbs that didn't make sense garbled up some chapters. The sad part is the story was really good even with all this until the mishmash made it unreadable. I would have loved to have finished the story and would if the author fixed the major errors that happened around chapter 175. Without those errors this story could have been great. Author let me know if you fix this I'd love to finish it.

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