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Item: That time I reincarnated as an Outer God
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This is the First Fic of a New Author who wants to write for fun, He uses his Dreams and Nightmares as Inspiration, English isent his First Language and he needs to Translate his Writing pleas go easy on him and Give Construcktive Criticisem

That time I reincarnated as an Outer God

Thanh_Tran_0715

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Thanh_Tran_0715AuthorThanh_Tran_0715

thank you, i keep improving my self English isn't my first language so sometimes I write wrong

Devorator:So that was the reason sentences broken sometimes. Thanks for the info 🙏 I hope he will improve himself in the future. I like this ff idea so I'll keep reading.
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DevoratorLv13Devorator

So that was the reason sentences broken sometimes. Thanks for the info 🙏 I hope he will improve himself in the future. I like this ff idea so I'll keep reading.

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DevoratorLv13Devorator

Its okay, do your best. We are reading it any way. 😅 I understand the events from the sentences, so there is no problem for me.

Thanh_Tran_0715:thank you, i keep improving my self English isn't my first language so sometimes I write wrong

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