Review Detail of FanFictionForge in French magic

any 'femslash elements' in this one?

No, it's Harry/Fleur.

I’ve only read literally the first paragraph so far, just FYI, However, I can already tell that you need to work on punctuation, when your whole paragraph is a single sentence, when it should be 5, like this one, it gets annoying, to, read,commas, are, not, periods,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.,,

i like it so far

Maybe fix your writing style, like using the most common format. -Dialogue- is low-key annoying to read. Writing format like "For normal dialogue" and 'for inner monologue' is more popular for a reason. Other than that, no idea. I can't read one chapter before getting annoyed because of the writing style.

Harem❓👀🤔🤔

FanFictionPremium - this name

You can find the link in the story description. You need to remove the space there.