how can a story with such perfect grammar have such horrible sentance structure?! the grammer is good, but the words are just thrown on the page like sentance structure doesn't matter or exist!

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I find it baffling how people can even read this. Most of the sentences don't even make sense.

Hello author-san I loved the previous fanfiction of fairy tail best wishes for this one as well .

Hahahahha, another masterpiece is coming, after the amazing Rwby FF and fairy tail FF. We have another great FF is coming. And it's a Multiverse this time huh, can't wait and see what will happen. I'm interested in what worlds will he travel too. And what kind of ability will he get. Now.... Since this is a Harem FF, I have a request to author dono, I won't ask to add specific characters now, but I just hope u won't drop hints here and there and then mislead your readers like what happened in fairy tail FF, it was cruel move, so I just hope this won't happen here( just my opinion) . The rest is all good, I just wish it a long story so I can enjoy for the rest of this year since I love your writing style, also please don't skip arks and fast pase things, take it slowly and go with the flow. My power stone are obviously going here even though I won't start reading it until ch 100 at lesst. I'm cheering for you author kun. [img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=recommend]

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It is not the best book in the world but by being X himself does the author cooks. Writing quality isn’t the best, there are some errors here and there. But it’s simple and easy to understand and the author improves in quality every book. Story development is pretty standard, the author tends to follow the canon (much to my liking) but does does his own thing. The only thing that has always seemed to be forced is the romance/harem relationship. Character design, it’s good. The MCs are always seemed to be a variant of being X (to my understanding), so it’s a bit weird there but they usually understand the world they go to (meta knowledge, etc.). Word background, well it’s usually an anime world and along the lines of such. I’m hoping for game worlds in this book, something like DND or even anime related games etc. Overall, I’m looking forward to the new book and here’s to the future of The Gamer’s Guild.

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why does subaru die? doesn't he have satila protection?