the fic is jumping on the line of good and bad. for a moment its the best and then its worse than chinese ones. but i will give 5 stars as till now, it has nothing too outrageous

I don’t know he’s to violent and to the point of it getting very annoying. This makes the whole story kinda boring and unserious I mean if your going to use violence on everything and ever what’s the point of a story.

I've only read a few chapters out of this dumpster fire of a fan fiction and in all honesty it sucks, the main character acts like a cringe Chinese young master and the story is all over the place one second the character is talking the next second some cringe drama and then immediately after that it goes back to talking again like make it make sense. so the story sucks because it has no real substance

Cringe yelling and cursing for no reason. Also MC takes over snape. So really in a Snape story. This could have been done so much better the premise is good but the plot is blah.

its a bashing novel. for those fortunate enough not to know what that means. its a novel written by disgruntled 14 year old girls that go out of their way to write thousands of words bashing the characters they dislike, often posted to wattpad/fanfic net.

This is a great story in all honesty, keep up the good work mate, maybe make him a dark lord in the future

Think of a mix between Deadpool, and The Joker. That is what the transmigrated soul, fused with Severus Snape, has become. Subtract the fourth wall breaking, and the desire to force his “one true love” into killing himself, you are left with a comedic, violent, very violent, and crazy person that makes you wonder if he is actually sane, and it’s the world that is crazy. Funny story, would probably have a 5 star review if Author had held back by 10% but it is still a fun read.

I wonder why Harry Potter fanfics keep integrating things like "Rituals are all good and because I'm the MC, there are no side effects.", "Wow, I'm in Slytherin and this isn't a school, but the pureblood summer garden." and "Wow, look over there, he's the heir to the oldest and most noble house of the Oompalumpas!"... sometimes I wonder if JK wrote a different version of Harry Potter with ideas from Asoiaf and FMA, can someone tell me where to find it.

Great start so far and I hope you keep up the great work! ...................................................................................................