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To_not_lose
To_not_loseAuthor1mthTo_not_lose

shameless author here! I had left aside my career as an author for a while, so my writing skills have deteriorated quite a lot. I hope everyone bears with it for a while and support me by pointing out any mistakes you see. Anyway, I look forward to the journey before us.

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Lost souls: Improving to triumph

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To_not_lose
To_not_loseAuthorTo_not_lose

Well, I won't lie. I was somewhat of a drug addict. I was hiding it but my parents found out about it and sent me to be a patient to a personal doctor.

Alejandro_Plaza:Why did you abandon her? It hurts to leave it with the potential it had and the continuity you were building. And the world development that was growing.
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Alejandro_Plaza
Alejandro_PlazaLv12Alejandro_Plaza

Did you abandon your other novel?

Brzol
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Will there be romance/harem elements? I'm not particularly fond of them, especially in villain-genre stories, but I liked the premise of the story. So, even if you add romance, I will still read it. I'm looking forward to great things. Good luck.

To_not_lose
To_not_loseAuthorTo_not_lose

sorry, I feel like continuing but I can't after so many days. I will probably just mess up the plot if I try to write it again.

Alejandro_Plaza:Did you abandon your other novel?
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To_not_lose
To_not_loseAuthorTo_not_lose

No romance. Even if such a thing happens, it would probably be one-sided from the FL side.

Brzol:Will there be romance/harem elements? I'm not particularly fond of them, especially in villain-genre stories, but I liked the premise of the story. So, even if you add romance, I will still read it. I'm looking forward to great things. Good luck.
Alejandro_Plaza
Alejandro_PlazaLv12Alejandro_Plaza

Why did you abandon her? It hurts to leave it with the potential it had and the continuity you were building. And the world development that was growing.

To_not_lose:sorry, I feel like continuing but I can't after so many days. I will probably just mess up the plot if I try to write it again.
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Alejandro_Plaza
Alejandro_PlazaLv12Alejandro_Plaza

Well, I wish you the best and resilience. And may you recover soon, and return to your best moment. Remember the drug is bad, not mainly because of your mental health, but more because of your financial situation and the damage it can cause to your body in the long term, and to your interpersonal relationships. The drug will consume more and more money, I hope you can control the addiction and if possible you will stop.

To_not_lose:Well, I won't lie. I was somewhat of a drug addict. I was hiding it but my parents found out about it and sent me to be a patient to a personal doctor.
To_not_lose
To_not_loseAuthorTo_not_lose

I stopped no need to worry. I have mostly recovered at this point. Thanks for the support though.

Alejandro_Plaza:Well, I wish you the best and resilience. And may you recover soon, and return to your best moment. Remember the drug is bad, not mainly because of your mental health, but more because of your financial situation and the damage it can cause to your body in the long term, and to your interpersonal relationships. The drug will consume more and more money, I hope you can control the addiction and if possible you will stop.