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PLEH_LUCIKEN
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2024-05-10 06:24

This might the worst rating that I have given to a novel...first of all, the so called "heroines",baggage, garbage and annoying. If a overpowered character has a to have a harem to be successful, it must either be a big harem or small harem with yandere's or small harem with strong women but all i see is liability in them. Then the next thing is about story, I skipped everything as it got really boring...I was just reading this novel because it was in the daily free novel but even the "free" did not motivate me to continue reading this...weird pacing, unlikable "fmls", somewhat okay MC and also the mystery again and again was getting really annoying like it was not mystery that would pull you in to continue reading but it was like a adv that would pop up during a good fap but in this case even that was not a good one. Will probably, come back to this after this gets completed. Still...Good job author, Keep it up!

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PLEH_LUCIKEN
PLEH_LUCIKENLv4

Honestly...it would have been better if it was just a power fantasy where the MC just steamrolls his enemies...

Cosmic_Ceaser
Cosmic_CeaserAuthor

Well, I can't say much, and I won't say things like it's just you who doesn't like it, but if you had read the book till the later part, you wouldn't have said that. Bro, book is about charecter development and power development, the MC is too OP, I wrote it I the synopsis, you can't expect everyone to be able to match him. And the heroines that you call baggage, one of them is a top Raider, while the other one got something I can't disclose rn. I will just say this: you shouldn't judge a book with just some chapters. All of this is on the premise that you didn't read the book till the later part, if you did read it then I guess, I am sorry for getting your hopes up.

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StanLJP
StanLJPLv15

Novel isn’t bad, but it’s a tad bit underwhelming. Kind of expected more when reading the author’s note in the synopsis. While the MC is indeed stronger than everyone in his world by a large margin, the situations surrounding him are quite frankly annoying. Not to mention the fact they’re left to stew for far too long and aren’t taken care of for no logical reason. That leads me to the novel’s progression, it’s entirely too slow, or rather inconsistent. Oftentimes an event that can be explained in a single chapter, is extended by several. I get the need to give readers a better idea of what they’re reading, but that’s no reason to spoon feed us everything like we’re slow of comprehension. There’s also the flip-flopping of past/present and flashbacks anidst events. Unnecessarily prolongs things and disrupts the flow of reading. Moving on, the MC, his interactions with others, the romance. I actually like the MC’s personality for the most part as he isn’t a pushover and is cruel to a satisfying degree. If anyone crosses him, he’ll give them hell(for the most part). He’s smart, snarky and just overall an enjoyable character to read about. My problem with him though in this regard stems from the romance. Honestly, when the story began I felt things were moving a bit too fast as within 10 chapters he was already moving in on two women. But after several dozen chapters, no further progress is made. It’s not until recent chapters that he has finally made a move after their feelings have long been made clear and a substantial amount of time passing. It was long overdue and at that point I felt no satisfaction from it finally happening. Anyhow, while I had several criticisms, I’d still recommend giving this a chance as it has its merits and I can see myself continuing to read this on occasion.

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