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haha!! love the beginning, it captures the real struggle of authors when their audience chooses the wrong side. the writing quality is also great. I'll be following this one closely.

Nice start. I've read many cultivation novels and this one had managed to be unique! No joke, it's a good book and the soft touch of mystery is gnawing at my sanity.

This certainly exceeded my expectations when I started reading this story. While the premise and idea seem cliche, the author makes an overused idea seem unique and compelling with characters that integrate well within the story this far. While the plot is still in its initial phase while I’m writing this, I’ve been impressed with what’s happened thus far and am excited to see what happens next. Highly recommended, 5 star novel.

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The writing quality, update stability, and character design are all pretty good. The only thing I have to comment about is the world. I really have no idea what it’s like so far. The only info I have is that there are sects, a protagonist, and there was a spar on a mountain that created a sword lotus. The concept of the story is great though. And I might be wrong but the fact that he sees things pop up in comic format as information is interesting. At least, that’s what I imagine while reading it. As of 27 chapters in I definitely recomend.

A very good novel in my opinion, good writing quality (there are some typos and some he/she problem but it doesn't effect the overall story and the grammar and the phrasing is good.) The story's plot is very good and the author doesn't stretch things out too much, it's a little fast paced for me but it's very enjoyable. The characters are very written, l really like the mc, seems more realistic in his choices and is likable. The world is vast and not explored much, but it's been hinting that mc is gonna explore. A solid 4.3+/5 in my opinion, hope author doesn't drop it.

I like the beginning, although I would like to have a separate chapter to better understand the power levels and levels of cultivation techniques. I really like the potential in character development and the way they interact. dont drop pls