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omiguh
omiguhLv411mth
2024-04-06 10:36

Honestly, great story so far. The punctuation and writing quality is superb. You also dont have superman be an overpowered monster right from the get go. You kind of have him as the son of lois and superman in superman returns. Weak at the start but will grow stronger. With a superman mc, you kind of expect the story to go by incredibly fast but you are taking your time which i am ok with as long as you keep the updates frequent. I mean 100,000 words and we still arent even close to the start to the GoT timeline. You also completely changed the lore?, timeline?, idk what the right word is but the story will be quite different once it reached the timeframe of when the GoT show takes place. Also i find it difficult for caelums brother and father to survive in this war. At least one will die, dont know which, probably the father but one will. I also love the fact that you didnt just take the whole superman story and just drop it into Game of thrones. Like not naming him clark kent or having more people involved in the secret. Honestly, i just have nothing but praises and the only thing i can complain about is not enough chapters and words but even that is a weak complaint since you have 100,000 with just barely over a months timeframe lol. Anyways, looking forward to the next chapter

A Song of Sun and Stars [Man of Steel x ASOIAF]

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Maximus_Quill
Maximus_QuillLv4

I'm a big fan of Superman and what he represents both in the world of comics and as a moral figure, so whenever a story illustrates such a character as what he was created to represent, I may not be of the all partial when reviewing. Having said the above, this is definitely a story that aims to be one of the stories that will not allow me to be partial, it shows that the author has a deep understanding of the world he uses for his story, since the construction of the world flows without notable problems, the secondary characters have a palpable soul and are not only filler for the story, you can feel the attachment to the relationships that the main character has with his family since it is lived by the author's skill. Having 8 chapters so far the pace of the story in my opinion is perfect for the type of work the author is doing (since it is again a new origin story for Superman). The chapters are long and immersive which is quite compelling and if the author continues publishing at the pace he has been doing so far it is a very interesting story to have in our libraries. Surprisingly, I am the first person to review the story so as a sign of my good wishes I will leave the first (of which I am sure will be many) review with 5 stars.

1yr

La_o_n_u
La_o_n_uLv1

I'm not one to leave reviews but this story deserves it. good grammar, entertaining and fluid dialogue, good pacing and captures very well what Superman represents (translator)

1yr
Ostiel
OstielLv2

Currently in Chapter 10: This is without a doubt one of the most promising fanfics I recommend, Read and make your own opinion

1yr
Kid_Wicked
Kid_WickedLv1

Loving everything so far. I like how it's a slow burn, for it's pretty realistic and parallel to the original Superman. I do wonder if there will be a bit of a timeskip, or if there'll be a Zod situation in the future. Keep up the good work.

9mth
MisterOrange
MisterOrangeLv14

Quality work, I cannot wait to read more

1yr
in_inquisitor
in_inquisitorLv1

Reveal spoiler

27d
Lord_Freezer
Lord_FreezerLv1

Gonna be about 400 chapters before supes finally grows up and stops being a blubbering baby. Who tf wants to read a whole story where the mc is a 5 year old.

3mth
FnaticOtaku
FnaticOtakuLv14

I understand it’s a slow burn, but it doesn’t justify making a superman inspired character to be completely weak. Too many character POVs and you don’t even know which character you’re reading from to the point that the main character is basically a side character with all the different side stories happening. It’s a slow burn because there’s no character progression to be made, up to the newest chapter and even then it’s other people’s POV seeing the consequences of caleum’s action tip toeing around the plot just to drag it out. It’s a good premise and but could be better if you focused on the main character instead of force feeding 100 different ones. Chapters 1 to 25 I barely read anything about the MC. Other than he goes on the be a maester and gets his links

3mth
ZHODIAXK
ZHODIAXKLv3

I hope you finish this nice work

3mth
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