Review Detail of oppaidaisuke_69 in Gundam System in Multiverse
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why did you use the surname "Yamato" again? that is the surname of the Imperial Family of Japan(Royal family of Japan) you should've used Morgenröte as the MC's surname since his company's name is "Morgenröte" anyway
Gundam System in Multiverse
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Wingzer0:Just named the character after my favorite protagonist from the franchise
Wingzer0:Just named the character after my favorite protagonist from the franchise
none taken, everyone has an opinion if the name is the only complaint I think I'm writing a pretty good story then
oppaidaisuke_69:The name sucks! no offense by the way
Yeah it's only the name but here's a suggestion: why not form a Copy of Earth Federation but with no corruption and all the original charter was NOT altered by the corrupts who assassinated the first Prime Minister of the Earth Federation I remember even posting the original and unaltered charter/constitution of the Earth Federation so you can have a reference if you hadn't noticed yet:
Wingzer0:none taken, everyone has an opinion if the name is the only complaint I think I'm writing a pretty good story then
I agree with the commentator that I wouldn't type his/her name because of it it vulgar Morgenrote means "Dawn" your MC is the bringer of a new dawn in that world so don't you want to emphasize that??
Wingzer0:Just named the character after my favorite protagonist from the franchise