Review Detail of Spirit_Immortal in This Life As A 2nd Generation Villain
Review detail
Well guys Spirit is here 😀what u can expect in the novel . I'll also here your all questions regarding novel here. 1. Smart MC he doesn't use his strength like those noob villains , he likes to use his brain more. 2. Cold from outside but soft from inside MC and ruthless to his enemies......he won't mind going against anyone to keep his life......and yes mc won't mind control his womens or any girls.
This Life As A 2nd Generation Villain
Spirit_Immortal
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bro all lemons are from my side here all are written by my hand.... 😞....NXT lemon is on ch44.....u can see it?... XD 😂
Sabaroth_zarkiel:You should write some lemons from yourself too, there were not a poylt of lemons in the original and some characters got to few lemons so if you write some from yourself It would be good
Sabaroth_zarkiel:You should write some lemons from yourself too, there were not a poylt of lemons in the original and some characters got to few lemons so if you write some from yourself It would be good
No that's not what I meant, you are writing lemon from when they said "they went and did it" but what I meant to say is that you should write lemon separately from that like write it even if they didn't mention about "they went and did it" since in the original they were some who might not have done it with the Mc or didn't do it multiple times so you should write some extra lemons chapter from your side on your on.
Spirit_Immortal:there are no lemons in OG.....they just said we went and did it ...all in 1 line ....
i understand what u want to say ..butt only the 1st lemon in ch 12 is mention in og.......the lemons in ch 22 or 23....and next one in ch 44 & 45 are all added by me......they are not even mentioned in og....i make situation for the lemon and then add it ....u can check with with og.....u can definitely see too much difference in mc and his love towards girls (eg..wen Jing) here .....there are only 1 lemon mention in og . .but here it'll be 3 lemon situations and 6 lemon chaps .....try reading mine after reading og ..the u will see the difference...(anyway it was good suggestion from an expert reader here if I hadn't add it already)...... XD 😶🌫️
Sabaroth_zarkiel:No that's not what I meant, you are writing lemon from when they said "they went and did it" but what I meant to say is that you should write lemon separately from that like write it even if they didn't mention about "they went and did it" since in the original they were some who might not have done it with the Mc or didn't do it multiple times so you should write some extra lemons chapter from your side on your on.
interesting 🤔😦 Idea 💡 ..but my plate is full with 2 novels.....I can't handle one more....as my works are not contracted yet....so if I get contract ..and finish my one novel I'll certainly write one....
Heaven_Earth_4157:hey can anyone make a novel where a villain mcexpose ptotagincst having system to world . crazy scientists capture protagonist for research
Heaven_Earth_4157:hey can anyone make a novel where a villain mcexpose ptotagincst having system to world . crazy scientists capture protagonist for research
when author's get contract from webnovel they Can lock 🔒 chaps ...not everyone get contract ..it depends on luck too
BRI_JESH:so lock chapter is put in place by the authors or someone