I'm put off by the story when I see elements from outside the original anime. I think it would have been better if it had been introduced as "a Kekkei genkai where he can transform chakra into reishi form" instead of using reishi. His desire to establish a Sternritter also distracted me from the story. In fact, it would be a pleasure to read a story in which he discovered his powers on his own, without his System. Almost reaching Jonin level in 4 years? I'm sure there are people who love it, but I'm one of those who love it "from weak to strong". The overall score I give to this story is 2.8, but there is no need to deduct points as I have not encountered a situation that I did not like or particularly hated due to my personal tastes.
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