Review Detail of Dr_Squalid in Shadow Slave: As the Seasons Change

Mandatory Author 5 star review. I am new to the writing Fan-fiction scene but I have always been an avid reader, so please tell me what you think of my writing. I will use the rest of this review as a way to explain somethings about this book. I have planned this book in my mind up to the beginning of Volume 3 (After Talvir becomes an Awakened), and for your information yes I plan to integrate him to Sunny's circle around the later half of Volume 2, I know some people dislike this approach but a truly believe that it is going to feel organic for a couple reasons, which I will not explain here (read the book gaddamit). The main character IS NOT going to be overpowered from the beggining I want him to grow and change with challenges must like the original characters did, for me it is the most beautiful part of their adventure. Also, I dont know if there will be romance, however if I feel like it fits and is logic that two characters grow feelings for each other I may include it (if I do I will add the tag. Thats all, my writing schedule is 1 to 2 chapters every 1 to 2 days. So enjoy the story and I hope you have a great experience!