The translation is excellent and I have not found any grammar mistakes, so on that front this fanfic is okay. But I have reached chapter 32 and stopped reading cuz I felt the author is constantly nerfed his MC. The MC have a system that can enhance his physique, spirit and talent through points. But instead of using those points to increase his talent (and the his Dou Rank) he uses the points to increase his Qi Method level... I have never seen someone so stupid before! Except for the author nerfing his MC I can't think of another reason for this.. Also, just as any Chinese fanfic, the MC like always is getting tangled uselessly with females and causing stupid misunderstanding. I'm so sick of this that I just dropped it.
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Did you even read the novel? The system of his depends on acquiring Points, and to acquire points, he needs to train/upgrade his techniques/skills. Upgrading his Qi Method is the same as increasing the absorption method of energy while Aptitude/talent is how well he can convert that. Also, every 20 points is equivalent to a cultivation realm in BTTH but the system's stats are limited by Magic Beast cores to further upgrade past that bottleneck, while the Qi Method can be upgraded or fused with Points... that needs him to cultivate as fast as possible to acquire, duh. It is a matter of short-term and long-term gain.
