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dtnizu
dtnizuLv158mth
2024-04-24 17:38

my only issues is getting confused when they mention her then few rows down change it to him, so it's is a guy or a girl the character , not the main fl, but the rest of the characters, and then ar times changing the names. like so what's their name again. a bit frustrating, over the storyline is good just that main flaw, and idk if they trying to back on the character perspective, and at time it's written double.

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Traisa_akito
Traisa_akitoLv15

I feel that its a translation. Since the author sometimes mixed up the chapter as if she didnt write it. And i used to read MTL novel and it mixed up the he and she

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