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DaoistYzolYZ
DaoistYzolYZLv144mth
2024-07-22 03:41

It's good, if I have to give a con it would be the fact the mc is too lucky, as he said he attracts peoples who have rare talents too easily. His personality is not bad, he dreams to become a hero despite everything that happened to him. But he doesn't give the feeling of someone who had grow in the slum, he mentioned the stories he read when he was a child but how is it possible? About his childhood friend, no mention about how he became responsible of this sick girl. And all girls around him seems to fall in love too easily, I'm sure this story need a harem tag.

God of Adaptation

CheekyForehead
4.6
159 Chs

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CheekyForehead
CheekyForeheadAuthor

Thank you for bringing that to my attention!! The things you have mentioned will be cleared up in future chapters. I apologize if I failed to incorporate the “born in the slums” feel to the mc’s personality, though I promise to make it so in the later chapters. As for the “girls falling in love with him too easily”, not every girl he meets falls for him. The two love interests spent quite a bit of time with him before catching the slightest feelings, but I’ll make sure to further make it clear in the future. And no, I have no plans of this being a harem. A little spoiler: there may be love interests, but he would only have 1 wife in the future. I would like to express my gratitude to your honest criticism as it is only with this that I will be able to grow as an author. Even with its flaws, I do hope that you enjoy reading this little story of mine. May you have a pleasant reading experience~

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Hello, shameless author here again with his 5-Star rating to his own novel. Regarding the typos with some of the chapters, I have fixed it thanks to one of you pointing it out! I couldn’t express my gratitude enough! If I can only stamp these stars on your arms… T - T Anyways, if were there’s some instance in the future wherein you notice an error either typographically or grammatically, please comment it down. As a reader, that was one of my “icks” when I’m reading a novel. Therefore as an author, I would like to eliminate any possibilities of me making those mistakes. That’s all for my rant~ Also, if you’re enjoying my novel, may I ask you to please kindly leave a review entailing your honest thoughts! It would help me greatly<3 May you all have a pleasant reading experience~

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Omg! Reading this story changed my life. I became lucky and I passed all my tests with perfect scores. I even won 100000000000000000000000000000 dollars in gambling. You should definitely read this! This is true because I am not a desperate author! Yeah~ Yeah~ Even I am cringing from what I just wrote~

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I really like the concept of Adaptation.

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