The problem with this novel is the lack of tension. A lot of things happen in a short amount of time. The main character gets really strong for someone who just started his journey compared to Fang Yuan in the early arcs of the original novel. While Fang Yuan used any Gu he could get, this guy creates his own without experience. This novel has some good ideas but it needs a rewrite.
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