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SapoemsaboadoLv44mth
2024-08-19 22:17

Well, I don't usually do reviews but I feel like I should talk about this novel. When the author said in the synopsis that Harry would be a more "tough" guy, I liked it because no one likes a cowardly MC, I also never expected a hero because of the synopsis, but I definitely didn't expect an emotionless psychopath. Don't get me wrong author, but I expected him to be at least a little human in his choices, a lot of the time he was unnecessarily violent. not to mention that he is an extremely dull MC, understand that a person improves himself with a goal in mind, whether that goal is good or bad, and I haven't found any reason why this MC improves himself, he is just a curious being who basically doesn't care about anyone and it's as if he only tolerates those who are next to him. no passion, no desire to protect something or follow an ideal, just keep researching and becoming strong in the process and running over whoever. all that said, the world building and writing is good but the mc just ruins it. (This entire review was done using Google Translate, so if there are any errors, please forgive me)

HP/DxD: Raven

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Bob_Uchiha_XD
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Well... - MC is self insert, as Harry Potter. - Harry have 10 oldyears. Is OP, potions master, very smart and at that age he concludes his magical studies at the Salen school with amazing grades. The author writes that the protagonist is the greatest genius in history. - The protagonist only does 3 relevant things: study, seek to be the center of attention and praise himself as the best magician in history. I repeat, the protagonist finished studying at the magic school in Salen. Therefore, going to study at Hogwarts would prove that the protagonist has mental retardation and autism.

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SpaceKatss
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I haven’t read it let, but I know it’s going to be amazing like all the other books you’ve written so far.I can’t wait to read another masterpiece from you. Please keep up the amazing writing!!!

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alcoholic panda only show us good things, and now is a mad doctor harry? put me in, i just hope that the updates will be atlest weekly....

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AmericanNinja85
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Not really a huge HP fan but this is an interesting take on the story. Definitely worth the read.

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sahil_ahmed
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It’s a good story just like your other works and I hope you keep doing good work on this story as well as the other.

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Darquesse
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Overall this is a pretty straight forward wish fulfillment story, where the MC starts weak, but is a genius so that won't last long. My one problem with it is the authors spelling and incorrect word choice problems. Frequently, the author uses the wrong word that looks or sounds the same. Like using "peace" instead of "piece", or "Scurrying" instead of "scrying" and things like that. There is also the occasional word with one letter off of being correct.

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Uma história sobre Harry Potter e desde extremamente criativa como sempre ótimos histórias como essas são raras é bom ver alguém escrevendo algo que preste cara não se preocupa com quem fala mal da sua história é só inveja presta atenção nos caras que te apoiam porque ele sim querem o melhor para essa história 🤔🤔🤔😁😁😁👍👍👍

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I got some big expectations for this story, and I see a very good amount of potential with the story idea itself. It is up to the author to cultivate this potential and create an enjoyable story, I’ll come back and write a proper review after reading 30 chapters.

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