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2024-03-10 16:10

problems : power: Red priest of war does not have flame teleport its the magician ability totally different patway. they have a flame transformation whic they use to travel. they gain the ability to enhance only at sequence 4 . instigation is not the power of the hunter pathway, but understandable as he seems to be connected to the sefirah .

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Sequence 6: Conspirer Fire Teleportation: They are able to merge with their fire weapons and travel to the destination that their fire weapon lands. - The initial range is 10 meters. This range would increase over time as a Conspirer digests their potion. - They are able to merge with some of the Fire Spells they cast too, such as a Fireball, Blazing Spear, etc.

I_DONT_FKN_EXIST
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your 'problems' answer is "cus its a Fan-fic" 🤷‍♂️

master_ghoulking
master_ghoulkingLv4

yeah but when making a fanfic like this you can't just add on random elements to buff jjk that don't make sense for the type of frame you're working with which is lotm power system my main gripe Is how long it takes the MC with advancing to the next sequence especially when he as an idea of the acting method okay cause it took a side character with nothing but the knowledge of the acting method in lotm less than 12 months to reach sequence 6 of a potion so why did it take the mc of these fanfic 4 years to advance bro a dog was able to reach sequence 7 faster than the mc in 10 months for the dog to become sequence 7 with the acting method why his MC taking so long I Just want to know why it's taking so long for him to move to the next sequence even if the mc is lazy in 4 years he should have been a sequence 7 by now at least it feels forced that it,s taking so long for him to advance so you can purposely keep him weak and unable to one shot jjk verse.

I_DONT_FKN_EXIST:your 'problems' answer is "cus its a Fan-fic" 🤷‍♂️
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