Review Detail of Sir_Squirrel in Demon Slayer: Kamado Tanjuro Returns from Sekiro

not so sure about that. i think it's quite decent. English is not my native language, but even i can tell that it's not as bad as you portrayed it to be. maybe he improved it?

Bro, no offence, but if you didn't notice how horrendous the translation is especially in chapter 18 and the chapters close to that then you are probably blind or not knowledgeable enough in English to properly judge the writing on this fic.

Dod you read up to chapter 18?

Yes.

eh. i enjoyed it.

with the lack of new fanfics, anything would do.

Mtl poisoning... After a certain point, even if the text is written in Sumerian cuneiform or in a language that is a hybridization of ancient Arabic and Persian with Latin, it seems quite normal to you.

I don't see your problem. The grammar is completely fine, considering I've read many, many non-translated ffs with much worse grammar.