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hongguiwang
hongguiwangLv116mth
2024-06-19 11:29

This book is GOOD. This is the first non-published light novel I've read. I had some doubts in the first 20 chapters, as the MC has some flaws, as well as not being educated in the slightest on some very important things, but I kept on because it really had very promising attributes. Grammer/first person can be a bit off at times, but it's nothing that causes a disruption in the reading flow. I selected this book for the bl tag and was slightly disappointed when my expectations didn't seem filled, but the author knows what their doing, and I'm glad I trusted the process. Holy hell. Seriously, fantastic writing. Thank you. I need more.

Carnivals: Claimed By The Deranged Alpha Prince [BL]

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Bree_Airee
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Hi everyone! :)) 🎀 I figured I should leave a review since we’re ten chapters in. This is a boy love [b x b] and I believe you’ve gone over the warning I left at the bottom of the book lol! This isn’t a typical cliché high school romance book, this is way darker and once again, I want to urge everyone to brace themselves as they proceed with this book! General warning: Blaze isn’t an angel LOL! Frankly, he is a monster, but an insanely hot one though.😔 And as for Jules, he’s just a baby who needs protecting from everyone, including himself teehee. 🤭 I don’t wanna spoil this book so I’m being as vague as possible. If you have any questions, don’t hesitate to ask away! A happy ending is very guaranteed as well, so fret not! :) Happy reading! xx 🎀✨

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Ankoku_Kyo
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Each chapter leaves you thirsty and hungry for more and more! This is really crazy to be honest. I’m just ten chapters in and I’m fully HOOKED. Like, I literally cannot wait for the updates cause they’re always so freaking good. Love this book so much and I hope we get quicker updates 🥰🥰

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Oh my gosh! Where do I even start??!! 😭😭😭❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ First of all, Jules is such a baby and I wanna pick him up and keep him safe in my pockets ahhhhh!!! I love the plot so far, the storyline sounds like it’s gonna be really insane and I really can’t wait to read more.

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Amber_Roses
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I seriously can’t wait for Jules to rise to his full potential, because so far, i can feel that there’s a whole lot more to him. I feel sorry for him cause he went through an intense trauma in a single night. I can’t imagine how much pain he finds himself in whenever he thinks of those memories. This is a very beautiful story and I need more from him and Blaze. 💋

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Maryham_Raymond
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I'm hooked the characters especially my baby 🤭❤️ I really can't wait for his interaction with blaze and Taylor is definitely interesting 🤣🤣 and the roommate ( I really don't want to remember his name) you can't just be going up n down blaming people for his situation 😒 and my baby's mom friend am so grateful for him too at least my baby has a listening hear overall am in love with the story line

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crustymustyfeet
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honestly i really love this. first of all, author updates literally everyday, with a few exceptions (not complaining, i think thats amazing already) love the story, wish Jules could stick up for himself more but tbh i would literally be him if i were in that situation. its very well written and i have no complains whatsoever! thanks for the wonderful story author!

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Josiexoxo
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Okayy! So far into the story, everything is building gradually and I’m thoroughly enjoying it. I’m very curious about Blaze and I’m certain there’s way more to him than what meets the eyes. I seriously can’t wait to get to the part where he and Jules would get down and nasty LOL 😛🤭 I’m certain other readers would agree with me. Good job author and please keep updating frequently 🥰

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Every character is intriguing. They’re created in a way that you can’t just help but want to know more and more about them. So far, my fave is the protagonist and his new best friends Taylor and Josh. Of course, I’m curious about Nick and I have a feeling that he’s gonna be a great person. I also can’t wait to see pre of Blaze!!! 😆😆❤️

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EmeraldOsaro
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This book is great so far, I really appreciate the way the author narrate every single details about this book and the diction is quite simple and easy to understand 😌. My only complaint is the SUSPENSE 😁😁but what a good novel without a suspense lol. I can wait for the journey between Blaze and Jules to unfold like I CAN’T WAIT 😩anyways I’m hooked and thanks author for this wonderful piece

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wow just wow 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜, I have now words🎀😍

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