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2024-08-02 03:23

I really, really love this, the world background is super creative, a mesh of futuristic sci-fi, but still maintaining the slice of life aspect and the great characters. Excited to see which more games and movies the MC will adapt and how the people will react to them. My only critique is the update stability, but I can hardly fault someone for that. Keep the good work :) Ps: if possible, tell us when the next chapter will launch every time you write one, otherwise I will always be checking.

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Writing Quality: 5/5 The prose in this novel is exceptional. The author has a masterful command of language, crafting sentences that are both beautiful and impactful. The descriptive passages are vivid and evocative, immersing the reader in the story's world. Dialogue is sharp and true to the characters, making interactions feel authentic and engaging. Updating Stability: 3/5 While the writing itself is strong, the novel's updating stability leaves something to be desired. There are noticeable gaps between updates, which can disrupt the reading experience and make it difficult for readers to stay engaged with the story. More consistent updates would greatly enhance the overall experience. Story Development: 5/5 The plot is well-constructed and expertly paced. Each chapter builds on the last, keeping the reader hooked from beginning to end. The author does an excellent job of weaving together various plot threads, leading to satisfying and unexpected twists. The story's progression feels natural, with each development adding depth and complexity. Character Design: 5/5 Characters are a standout feature of this novel. Each one is meticulously crafted, with distinct personalities, motivations, and growth arcs. The protagonist is relatable and well-rounded, while the supporting characters add richness to the narrative. The relationships between characters are dynamic and evolve in meaningful ways throughout the story. World Background: 5/5 The world-building in this novel is top-notch. The setting is richly detailed and immersive, with a well-thought-out history and culture that enhances the story. The author skillfully integrates world background into the narrative without overwhelming the reader with exposition. This creates a believable and engaging backdrop for the characters and plot. --- Overall, this novel excels in many areas, particularly in writing quality, story development, character design, and world background. With more consistent updates, it has the potential to become even more compelling. " sorry for the AI review my grammar is not there good " 😂😂

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