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OneeyedDaoist
OneeyedDaoistLv48mth
2024-07-09 13:49

pls tell the originals name rfbtrghtyhyththytjy6rjuykkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

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R2_D06
R2_D06Lv4

This is the original bro, read the synopsis better.

ImJackBlank
ImJackBlankLv14

read the first line of the synopsis. it literally says this is translated into English. maybe you should take your own advice

R2_D06:This is the original bro, read the synopsis better.
PunishmeCommander
PunishmeCommanderLv4

take your advice bro it literally says he writes it in his own language and translated to english bro

ImJackBlank:read the first line of the synopsis. it literally says this is translated into English. maybe you should take your own advice
Veno123
Veno123Lv4

You literally didn't read the first line.... You just saw the word "translated" and thought it was a translation .......

ImJackBlank:read the first line of the synopsis. it literally says this is translated into English. maybe you should take your own advice
ImJackBlank
ImJackBlankLv14

trans·late verb past tense: translated; past participle: translated 1. express the sense of (words or text) in another language. "the German original has been translated into English" it's still a translation bro

PunishmeCommander:take your advice bro it literally says he writes it in his own language and translated to english bro
ImJackBlank
ImJackBlankLv14

trans·late verb past tense: translated; past participle: translated 1. express the sense of (words or text) in another language. "the German original has been translated into English" it's still a translation

Veno123:You literally didn't read the first line.... You just saw the word "translated" and thought it was a translation .......
ReactionAddiction
ReactionAddictionLv4

we are not talking about if this is tl or not, we are talking about if this is original or made by another author. Yes, you are right that this is translated but it's not taken from another author and then translated, it's the same author as the author of the original language the novel was written and if you somehow are still persistent to prove your "point" then something's wrong with you and idk what it is

ImJackBlank:trans·late verb past tense: translated; past participle: translated 1. express the sense of (words or text) in another language. "the German original has been translated into English" it's still a translation
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Aizen_Sosuke_2864Lv2

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