The POV is awful. Sometime is the boy, sometime is I, another is the guy. And the dialogue kinda hard to read when sometimes with " ", some other is -. The plot is decent I guess.
its a translation what do you expect... in many of these translations, expect all characters to be refered to as he, she, it, boy, girl that, this... basically expect all characters to be hermaphrodites, and/or futonari, cause thats how theyre all translated as...