Review Detail of AverageJoe2 in abyss system

This feels like a shameless plug, but hey, I've poured my heart and soul into this web novel, and Web Novel isn't giving it the recognition it deserves. So, let me tell you what's special about it. Beyond the typical system novel, my main character is an iskied to this world, adding a layer of uniqueness. I've tried to make some unique powers that I hope will blow your mind. Now, let's get real. The strong points? It's gotta be the dialogue. I've spent a lot of time making those conversations pop. But, I'll be honest, my action and background scenes could use some work. So, here's where I'm asking for help. If you've got suggestions on how to amp up the action and make those backgrounds more vivid, hit me up. And yes, I gave myself five stars on world-building. Go ahead, fight me on it. (Just kidding, please don't actually fight me.) Alright, enough rambling. If you're into the things I've mentioned, give it a read. And for those who've already dived in, hit me with your questions. Let's make this a conversation.