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2024-07-03 13:35

Almost Perfect, I know it’s a translation but it would have been a perfect story if some parts of it were more though off. For example, what happened to the earning of the songs he recorded, second the mc is way too headstrong which is a bit unrealistic. He just dismisses people left and right as if just because he reincarnated and knows the future it’s gonna be alright for him. But since he has reincarnated his ripples would effect the future and therefore the mc should be a more down to earth in a sense where he doesn’t dismiss people all the time.

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